well, i’m new guy here. are my sentences at this bellow right?

 I’m just ordinary man
from ordinary family
but I know
I have to become more than ordinary
for my country
for my religion
at least for who giving me birth

thanks, before

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Author profile : I'm just ordinary man from ordinary family but I know I have to become more than ordinary for my country for my religion at least for who giving me birth