I would like to introduce myself
My name is Laila Febriani
I am a member of the Payload department
I am a designer drafter of the Interior Design
I am very grateful for the reception and treatment of you all while I was here
I am grateful to have completed some of my tasks
such Design-1 and Design-2 and Design-3
We hope we can continue this cooperation
if there is something to talk about, please don’t be hesitate to contact us
We convey apologize if while we’re here for, our behavior is less pleasing to you
And we hopefully in the future can be better
Saya mencoba memperkenalkan diri dan sekaligus melaporkan hasil selama kami berada di tempat tugas
Mohon koreksinya
Terima kasih
7 comments
fjr
October 17, 2011
Hi Laila, glad to know you. Here’s my short opinion.
1. such as Design-1,… and Design-2.
2. please do not hesitate ….     (hesitate is a verb)
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3. I prefer to write:
We apologize for any mistake and inconvenience that we have made during stay here and will correct them immediately. (hmmm, waiting for next comments
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Swara Bhaskara
October 19, 2011
Great opinion, FJR. For #3, I’d make it even shorter, “We apologize for any inconvenience that we have done during our stay here.”
@Laila: Is drafter a common terminology in engineering? I’ve looked up the dictionary.com but I couldn’t find it.
kiki doble Q
October 19, 2011
hai laila.. number phone please… :p :p :p :p hahahahhah
how do you do laila…!!
nice to meet you here..
Swara Bhaskara
October 19, 2011
Hi Kiki,
May I have your phone number, please? (Or, May I have your number, please?). I’ll give you a shout about the project I am running now.
pik
October 21, 2011
Saya mau tanya, penggunaan  UN, LESS, dan ada juga kata UNLESS tersendiri… mohon bantuannya…
Swara Bhaskara
October 24, 2011
Hi PIK,
Your question has been replied on this post: UN, LESS, UNLESS. Sorry for the late reply, though.
H. Ahmad Fannany
October 29, 2011
Good morning friend
I come again to meet you, How are you and family friend?
. Could you please explain to me, what the different among words “Responsible, Duty and Task
Thank you
H.Ahmad Fannany